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Overview Buries Key Comparison in Task 1

Task 1 · Overview · May 2026

Direct answer

The bury trap is writing an overview that mentions everything except the main comparison. You open with minor categories, small fluctuations, or every country name—then never state who was highest, what doubled, or which line crossed which. Examiners want one clear headline: the dominant trend or contrast. A crowded overview reads like a body paragraph and often scores Band 6 for Task Achievement because the key comparison is missing or late.

Signals you buried the comparison

Laundry list Overview names six categories with no winner
Detail first Small 2% moves before the doubling trend
Body duplicate Overview repeats numbers the body will repeat again

Bury trap vs strong overview

Weak overviewStrong overview
Every series mentioned onceMain contrast in sentence one
Starts with 1990 figuresStarts with overall pattern
No superlativehighest, lowest, only rise, crossed

Comparison-first overview

Before writing, ask: What is the one thing a busy reader must know? Write that in sentence one. Sentence two only if a second pattern is equally important. Pair with overview sentence traps and overview missing comparison.

Key takeaways

  • Overview = headline comparison, not mini body.
  • Lead with the dominant trend or contrast.
  • Defer minor figures to body paragraphs.
  • If no superlative appears, the overview may be buried.

FAQ

Often one or two sentences: main trend or comparison first, optional second line for the other big pattern—no data laundry list.
Only if a single figure is the headline comparison; otherwise save numbers for body paragraphs.
State both in one sentence with clear contrast language—do not bury them under minor categories.

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