Body Paragraph Without Topic Sentence Trap

Task 2 · Coherence · May 2026

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Last updated (factual triplet change): 2026-06-30

Direct answer

The no-topic-sentence trap is opening a body paragraph with an example, context, or linker instead of the main claim. Examiners read for paragraph unity: one central idea, then support. When the topic sentence is missing or buried in line four, the paragraph feels like a story or a list. That caps Coherence and Cohesion even when vocabulary is strong. Fix with one clear claim in the first sentence, then explanation and one focused example.

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How to spot the trap in your draft

Example-first For instance opens the paragraph with no claim

Buried claim Main idea appears after background or data

Two ideas Paragraph switches topic mid-way without a new paragraph

Paragraph traps that cap Coherence

Trap	Why it fails
Linker only	Furthermore with no new claim
Country story	Long anecdote; examiner must infer your point
Repeat intro	Body rephrases thesis without developing one reason
Split support	Two unrelated examples in one block

Topic-sentence formula

Sentence 1: claim linked to thesis. Sentences 2–3: explain why. Sentence 4: one concrete example. Final sentence: mini-link to thesis or next paragraph. Read only sentence 1 of each body paragraph, your essay outline should still make sense.

Key takeaways

First sentence = main claim, not example or filler.
One paragraph = one reason or one aspect.
Mechanical Firstly is optional; clarity is not.
Read sentence 1 of each body para as an outline test.

FAQ

Yes if the first sentence is a short link, but the main claim must appear early, not after three lines of context.

No. A clear claim is enough; mechanical openers often sound template-heavy.

Task 1 uses overview and grouping; Task 2 body paragraphs need explicit central claims per paragraph.

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